Editing for Grammarphobes: The Play's the Thing
Saturday, my husband and I attended Chicago Shakespeare Theater’s production of The Madness of George III. Harry Groener treated the audience to a formidable performance in the title role, as he brought us down the descent with him and back up again, only to hint at another impending spiral downward yet to come.
It was powerful, and sometimes uncomfortably intimate, to witness this in a small venue. Groener brought majesty when necessary, but his true brilliance was at the feeble times when King George’s illness affected him the most, through his body, his slurred speech, and, most poignantly, through the vulnerability that shone in his eyes.
Playwright Alan Bennett created a character with so many layers, one could not help but be intrigued and awed by him. That is good writing. In two and a half hours, my heart ached for this man and what he had to endure.
Novelists can learn a lot from the theater. Playwrights do not have the luxury of several chapters of introduction in which to hook their audiences. It must be done right away or they lose them, and the yawns begin.
There is one scene in The Madness of George III in which the King has his staff read King Lear aloud. The irony, of course, is not lost upon them as they speak the lines of the Cordelia’s reunion with Lear toward the end of the play. Although he writes it for a few laughs, Bennett skillfully draws the parallels between the two men, further cementing the fact that, ultimately, this play is a tragedy very much in the Shakespearean tradition.
What makes Shakespeare and Bennett interesting? Characters that are at once powerful, yet flawed. Vulnerable, yet mighty. You don’t always have to like them, but you will be moved by them.
After watching something so wonderful, it stays with me, and I cannot help but try to figure out why. What worked? How was the plot crafted? What is the overriding theme? How was that theme illustrated?
Writers of all sorts can learn a lot from the theater. I hope you go see a drama soon. You will be all the better for it.
On Another Note...
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